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A worker cleans carnival game tents in preparation for the San Joaquin County Fair in Stockton.

This is the first of a seires of shots I took of last minute preparations for the San Joaquin County Fair. I was first attracted to this scene by the bright colors of the tent. But the composition is awkward, the background is distracting and the posture of the subject is boring.

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    Clifford Oto

    Clifford Oto, an award-winning photographer, has been with The Record since 1984. Through the changes from black and white to digital photography, he’s kept his focus on covering the events, people and life of San Joaquin county. This blog deals ... Read Full
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